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Old 04-29-2008, 14:24   #2
Scarecrow28
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Good job. I, personally, didn't like the rather unexpected ending, as I had originally interpreted this as a combat-oriented piece. But if this was your intention, that is fine. The description was fairly good and I liked the style of it. The fluidity of the piece needs a minor amount of work, but it was otherwise good. Keep writing!

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