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Originally Posted by Scarecrow28
Good job. I, personally, didn't like the rather unexpected ending, as I had originally interpreted this as a combat-oriented piece. But if this was your intention, that is fine. The description was fairly good and I liked the style of it. The fluidity of the piece needs a minor amount of work, but it was otherwise good. Keep writing!
PS: What do you think of deviantart? I've been considering joining, but wasn't sure if it was truly worth it?
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That was the intent of the piece, and thank you for the hint; i'll work on that more.
About dA, I like it a LOT, but it's easy to get lost in the crowd... which I guess isn't that bad. If you do join though, please PM me your home page
