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Old 04-29-2008, 16:10   #5
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Originally Posted by Scarecrow28 View Post
Good job. I, personally, didn't like the rather unexpected ending, as I had originally interpreted this as a combat-oriented piece. But if this was your intention, that is fine. The description was fairly good and I liked the style of it. The fluidity of the piece needs a minor amount of work, but it was otherwise good. Keep writing!

PS: What do you think of deviantart? I've been considering joining, but wasn't sure if it was truly worth it?
That was the intent of the piece, and thank you for the hint; i'll work on that more.

About dA, I like it a LOT, but it's easy to get lost in the crowd... which I guess isn't that bad. If you do join though, please PM me your home page
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